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"How do you think Bill Gates got to be one of the richest men on earth?"
 
As a former Microsoft employee, I’d say that it was:
  1. by hiring smart people
  2. by building a marketing juggernaut
Microsoft doesn’t necessarily offer the best products (just ask any Apple enthusiast!), but they are unbeatable in marketing.
 
The good news is that although not everyone is "BillG", fortunately anyone can emulate BillG's formula for success.
 
So, what’s the secret of success?
 
Experts agree that people don’t just buy products or services, they buy "feeling" and "ideas". The buying decision may be justified using reasoning, but it’s made based on emotions. Some marketing gurus even claim that you can use subconscious "psychological triggers" to get people to buy your product.
 
So, ultimately, words sell your product.
 
But which words?
 
You want to plant mental images in your readers' minds that make them react positively to your proposition.
 
How do you do this? A good way is through hypnotic writing*:
"Hypnotic writing is intentionally using words to guide people into a focused mental state where they are inclined to buy your product or service.”
Hypnotic selling is a form of waking hypnosis. It is a trance state where you are wide awake but focused on something you are reading.
 
Hypnotic Writing achieves this state by the right use of words to create mental experiences. In other words, you get people fully focused on your website, brochure or sales letter, and your Hypnotic Writing leads them to take action.
 
 
Are you ready to see some hypnotic selling in action?

Below is a picture of a massage pen.

  
It’s a regular pen – it writes – and the tip of it also has a massaging head on it. Press it against your skin and you get a massage. I know that isn’t much to go on, but how would you write a paragraph to sell this pen?
 
Try jotting down a few ideas yourself, if you like…
 
Now, here is how one website describes the massage pen:
 
Product Description:
 
The unique metal ball-point pen with built in massage.
  • Rugged metal construction
  • Attractive design
  • Patented massage function
  • Replaceable ink refills
  • Batteries included
Well, is that Hypnotic Writing?
 
I don’t think so.
 
It’s got the facts, but it doesn’t have any reason, or benefit, for you to care about the facts. Result: Boredom.
 
Now, here is how the lively copywriters over at Stupid.com describe the exact same massage pen:
 
IMAGINE you had a teensy-weensy masseuse to carry around in your shirt pocket. Any time you desired, you could order your mini-masseuse to soothe your tired muscles and rub away your tensions. Now imagine this tiny masseuse had a pen sticking out of his head and ran on batteries.
 
Well, you’re not likely to come across a miniature, pen-headed masseuse -- but here’s the next best thing. Introducing the world’s first MASSAGING PEN!
Is that Hypnotic Writing?
 
You bet!
 
Would using Hypnotic sales copy like that improve your results? Why do you think the “stupid” sales copy was hypnotic?
 
Here are some reasons:
  • Use of the word “Imagine” (proven to improve results).
  • It talks about benefits rather than just features (people want a hole in the wall, not a drill).
  • It uses a powerful metaphor, your own “mini-masseuse”, to create an attractive mental image.
  • Sets up expectations (the mini-masseuse) and then shows how they can be met (the “next best thing” – the massaging pen).
  • Shows that it’s unique (“you’re not likely to come across…”)
  • It lets the user be in-control (“anytime you desired, you could order…”)
  • Describes the benefits in a non-technical way
Hypnotic Writing and Software
 
“But is Hypnotic Writing relevant to technical products such as software?” you may ask.
 
Absolutely!
 
The buyers of software are still people. They experience the same emotions as everyone else on the planet. And even technical buyers buy based on emotions.
  
The only difference between selling technical products and selling non-technical products is that it’s more difficult to make the leap from technology and features to benefits and convincing copy. Why is it so difficult?
 
Because you need to understand both sides of the "great divide": the product/technology AND the market/users. In my career, I’ve met very few people who understand both of these, even fewer who can translate features into compelling benefits, and still fewer who can write hypnotic copy.
 
Wouldn’t it be amazing if you could find someone who could do all this and help you increase your sales?
 
Well, I don’t know whether you’ll be quite as successful as BillG, but you can certainly emulate his success. Contact me today for a free, no-obligation consultation.

Here’s to your success!

Yours sincerely,

Paul Arinaga
* Hypnotic Writing was developed by copywriter and marketing guru Dr. Joe Vitale, and the example here is from one of his publications, although the analysis is my own.
 

  

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